Aet Lindling

Yeah... someone loan me a few? *looks around desperately* Look, I'm coming into some money real soon. I can pay you back, I swear. :lol:

Lol funny, yet random concept. The idea can work but only if you show more rather than tell. Don't tell the reader on what is happening. Show us so that ...

"Unless, of course, that's what you meant it to be." Yes, I did. :D Sort of a story-teller narration. "that = that's? and DIDDIE = DDDIE? Right?" Yup. I did ...

Hee, I'll try. It'll be quite random however... all of a sudden I'll have inspiration for something good.

*has come back to this* Whoa, many new reviews. Yes... but this one's pretty much done, bust. I'll take the webcam thing into consideration for if I do something like ...

Yeah, I'll fix that now.

Dreamer, the period thing is a no-no, that makes it seem the opposite of what was being conveyed, which was that he'd have to bring everyone else back before he ...

Yeah, I know. I'll probably make it a bit less crazy, this is its unedited form from a joke-ish thing on other forums. And Spider-Pig is amazingly great. And adorable, ...

Yes you are... you get on more, JK. C'mon. (He be new, and he know me, so cut he some slackeeeeeee. :lol: That had to be the weirdest use of ...

haha, you'd know wouldn't you Aet lololol Er. (shhhhhh!) :lol: Though actually, I started when I was twelve, but still, I know there are 11-year-old peoples who are "good with ...

Yeah, thanks for the critiques! I suddenly thought of the tread/trod thing when I was outside, but I forgot about it for a while because I wasn't sure if it ...

Yes! Fishes is a correct word! Referring to differing species, that is. Just one species, it's "fish". Kinda like bananas being an herb. 'Tis a rare fact most people don't ...

yes, I changed it.

Well, the not a lot of detail bit was on purpose, this takes place in a chat room after all. I liked the basic story too, maybe I'll make another ...

Added a little "goodbye" message at the end.